Monahans High School

l. Introduction

• It must stand out, catching the attention and interest of the reader.  Use at least two of the five senses.
• It can be a description of an engaging scene; it can ask a question, state a fact, or be a quote that has been emphasized by a parent, grandparent, or relative, be very positive, or it can be related to your obstacle.
• It must be unique and must stand out above all others. 

II. Body of Essay – Each section of the body should have only 2-3 sentences
Family:

• Describe your family being very specific:  ethnic background, country of origin, number of brothers and sisters, parent's educational background, and occupation
• Include any special circumstances such as: single-parent home, illness, death, or disability of a family member

Obstacles:

• Describe your most challenging obstacle.
• What character qualities have you learned, are you presently learning, and do you need to learn from your obstacle
• How will this obstacle help you to become the successful person you want to become in the future? 

​​​​​​​Community Service:

• Choose two or three community service activities to describe.  This is not a list
• What was your commitment?
• Relate a personal experience or story.  How did you make a difference?
• Did you find your purpose in life through your community service activities?
• If possible, your community service should match your life interests.